Here are the 10 Bukowski poems from Sisyphus Leaves. This chap, which is getting really hard to come by, also featured Richmond and Goodwin. It was printed in 1992 -- I think Goodwin was the publisher. I’m placing it in “First Appearances” but some of the poems may still be uncollected.
Can you let me know if it's clear what's happening here without any (or much) explanation?
http://bukowski.net/compare/weep.php
These are going up on the new site.
Manuscripts
weep - 1976-09-23 - carbon
http://bukowski.net/vault/displaymanuscript.php?show=poem1976-09-23-weep.jpg
Come On In! - pg. 144 - 2006
weep
weep for the indifference of flying fish
weep for the absence of long-haired blondes
weep for the sadness of yourself
weep for Bach...
Collected in Come On In.
There are quite a few changes. Missing lines in the original or missing lines in the reprinted version. Just take a look and compare them.