the continual condition

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    The condition

    Funny. Or not. The manuscript and the version in War All The Time are identical. Then... Clumsy, stupid shit like: there is nothing going to release it
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    The perfect silence

    More 1920s-style prohibition, more creative writing class. More, more.
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    To Weep In Her Hair

    Fuck the soprano or comfort the soprano? We know what Bukowski wants to do. But apparently Martin can't decide which he wants to do. to weep in her hair --- Thanks to Black Swan for sending me the manuscript for this one!
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