Actually, it sounds better just ending at: somethings don't change
To me it sounds like a place he may have ended it. But, remember this is just my "fantasy poem".
somethings don't change
my big brown-yellow
cat has
been prowling
this room.
he's waiting for
me to get
out of this chair
where
I type
it's often his
sleeping place.
All right.
he can have
it.
My ass
is beat from
3 months of
80 mile
round
trips to the
racetrack.
Just that
mass of faces
out
there
is horrifying.
I think,
doesn't anybody
else
see what
I see?
I don't
think that they
do, or
otherwise they would
run
out of
there screaming.
Somethings
don't change.
joe
To me it sounds like a place he may have ended it. But, remember this is just my "fantasy poem".
somethings don't change
my big brown-yellow
cat has
been prowling
this room.
he's waiting for
me to get
out of this chair
where
I type
it's often his
sleeping place.
All right.
he can have
it.
My ass
is beat from
3 months of
80 mile
round
trips to the
racetrack.
Just that
mass of faces
out
there
is horrifying.
I think,
doesn't anybody
else
see what
I see?
I don't
think that they
do, or
otherwise they would
run
out of
there screaming.
Somethings
don't change.
joe