Targets No. 15, 1963

mjp

mjp

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Four of these are still uncollected: I Knew What The Tigers Said, Letter To A Small And Kindly Princess, Answer To Some Sacramento Letters: and Stop Drinking, Drinking, Drinking...

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Andreas

Andreas

cirerita said:
The Days Run Away... was edited by Dorbin, who culled the poems from the littles and printed them verbatim.
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I thought of ships, of armies, hanging on...must have been an exception.
2 flies however (collected in Play The Piano...) is identically equal to the Targets version.
 
Andreas

Andreas

Yes, it does. You called it poetry for dummies or so. Inventing new lines to explain something that doesn't need any explanation.
 
Purple Stickpin

Purple Stickpin

Interesting. Of course, he could have been viewing Jane as a sort of common-law wife and using poetic license. Then again, you knew that, but we can't assume that everyone else does. :rolleyes:
 
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